ZOMBIEfan it’s too early for the mc to have problems with his opponents and the creator is already giving him a bit of problems shown in this episode already and I don’t like the idea of separating him from his daughter as I imagine the mc as me I like to read it like that and I will not find it pleasant if my daughter is separated from me and The creator keep the story as it is.
try to make the mc a bit weak and struggle in all of them the mc is too strong the story looks boring.
Create a struggling and a suspense situation for the mc and separate him from. His group for few episodes and show the girls struggle a bit
Heavenly_M
ZOMBIEfan it’s too early for the mc to have problems with his opponents and the creator is already giving him a bit of problems shown in this episode already and I don’t like the idea of separating him from his daughter as I imagine the mc as me I like to read it like that and I will not find it pleasant if my daughter is separated from me and The creator keep the story as it is.
ZOMBIEfan
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ZOMBIEfan
try to make the mc a bit weak and struggle in all of them the mc is too strong the story looks boring.
Create a struggling and a suspense situation for the mc and separate him from. His group for few episodes and show the girls struggle a bit