Well, as Nobody12 is not here on this chapter I will cover for him.
This is my first time reading this, so I might not know what’s going to happen the way he does.
That being said… I’m not sure what the MC’s true main goal is, but if it’s just finding or seeing his sister, it feels a bit too shallow. I hope a deeper purpose emerges as the story progresses.
yeah rn the depth in his character is missing we need some more backstory on his sister why she left him and isnt contacting anymore. The art is good but the story seems to be bland at times!
Silver244
Well, as Nobody12 is not here on this chapter I will cover for him.
This is my first time reading this, so I might not know what’s going to happen the way he does.
That being said… I’m not sure what the MC’s true main goal is, but if it’s just finding or seeing his sister, it feels a bit too shallow. I hope a deeper purpose emerges as the story progresses.
idkT0m
yeah rn the depth in his character is missing we need some more backstory on his sister why she left him and isnt contacting anymore. The art is good but the story seems to be bland at times!